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文学分类:诗歌     发布时间:2009-05-31     发布人:李冀香    浏览:777623 次  评论:4 次  修改:1 次 
修改时间:2010-11-23  修改人:思念有毒  修改后评论:643 次   我来评论   我来修改  

雪花与血花-

----写给我的学生

你们就是上天赐予的天使
你们的心灵
就如同那洁白的雪花
纯纯的  白白的
你们带给我的快乐
也有雪花的味道
纯纯的 甜甜的

我就是上天赐予的
护花使者
我的心灵
也如同那洁白的雪花
纯纯的  白白的
我也想送去我的关切
也想表达我对你们的爱
 

你们是否已经感受到
我对你们的爱?
这种爱
像雪花般  纯洁
像玫瑰般  鲜红

没有!
你们还未曾感应到?

我的心在滴雪!
鲜红  鲜红
如同玫瑰
一朵带刺的玫瑰
 

鲜红的血花
洁白的雪花
构成世界上
最美妙的风景

我站在栏杆上
仰望苍穹
一群白鸽飞过
带去我的问候
是否能捎来

你们的祝福?

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