I'm Zeng Ting. I like English very much. So I want to study English well.

     First of all, I listen to tapes. It improves my listening skills. Then I study by making vacabulary lists. I like to do it. Oh. I usually tallk with my classmates. It is interesting. Next I study by doing a lot of practice. It improves my writing skills.

     The other day, it was difficult for me to study English. So I dislike English. But one day my mother said to me:"You can do best." From then on, I want to study English well. Finally, I thank my English teacher very much.

点评：

          文章的第一段介绍要学好英语的原因，这与标题有点挂勾。因为只有你想学好它，你才会去钻研要如何学好它。

           文章的第二段才是介绍如何学好英语。作者介绍了四种方法，稍欠详细，如果能再补充一点就更好。

          文章的第三段表面上与题无关，但是她涉及了“妈妈”和“英语老师”这两个对她有影响力的人，正是因为他们作者才会认真地学习英语。外界因素是要学好任何一们学科的条件，所以，我认为从这一点来讲，最后一段不算跑题。